I’ve hesitated to include any writing examples with this idea since the whole concept is still in such beginning stages, but there is one version of the sketches at the end that includes very the first pass at writing. You’ll also find a small section of notes-to-self generated while working through the problem solving that lies within the idea.
There are three important moments in this story, and I haven’t solved our main character’s motivation yet. He is oblivious to the consequence of how he ends up dressed, and chaos ensues as a result.
The three most important points are how he ends up dressed, how the glasses are knocked off his face, and the moment at the end where we find out the audience is watching and our reader isn’t sure whether the whole episode was planned or not.
I’ve yet to solve these three points, and even the sketches are just the first glimpse into one way to solve the problems, but I’m so excited to explore many other versions of the solution!
Below you’ll find some notes to self on these concepts—a small selection of ruminations regarding these problems to solve.